Fishing for the future

Purpose: To persuade your audience to agree with your perspective. By sharing our opinion with othersto make them believe your point of view.

WALT: Persuade

Task: To write a persuasive piece of writing about “fishing for the future”

                

Self-Assessment	Peer Assessment
I can hook the audience with a dynamic opening sentence.                                                            I can convey an opinion.      I can support my points with detail e.g. evidence                                                 I can useconnectives (because, furthermore, although) tolink ideas.       I can use rhetorical questions   I can re-state to conclude	You can hook the audience with a dynamic opening sentence yes  You can convey an opinion sort of  You can support my points with detail e.g. evidence sort of You can useconnectives (because, furthermore, although) tolink ideas not really You can use rhetorical questions sort of You can re-state to conclude yes

Go Fishing

Hey you, when you go fishing have you been following these rules? Whenever you go fishing on a boat you must where a life jacket!!! Full stop. Even if you are a really excellent swimmer you have to wear a life jacket. You never know you might get caught in something, so you always have to wear a life-jacket, understand.

Have you ever caught a baby fish, well if you have I hope you put it back because it needs time to grow, although if the fish is a beauty you must put it back because it will have babies. Have you been respecting these rules? 

If you catch a fish, when it comes out of the water you put it in salt-ice, hey I said salt-ice not ice, salt-ice. 

When it comes out you also have to put it in a towel, oops not a towel a wet towel, understand.