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In writing we have been learning about energy and how it works. We learnt about how it works
Evaluation
I think I could of made the writing a bit more clear. I think I did well at making it visual.
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Well done. I think you could make you paragrafts bigger. # Lachlan
Well Done Jaiden you have made a good start towards explaining the science behind heat and temperature, however it would have been nice to see you go into more detail into the 'nitty gritty' of the science instead of just giving examples.
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